dark angel52

That is terrible that it happened to you. It has to take a lot of guts to post it up here and say it to people. I do hope things ...

This is a really interesting piece. It wasn't what I thought it was going to be, and I like that. It was a bit confuisng where it was the girl, ...

Good Start. Besides the few grammar mistakes that are already pointed out, I can see no others. So good job on the grammar. It can be a bit confusing, especially ...

That was a good poem, it was simple but right to the point. Other than the few grammatic errors that were pointed out by the others, I saw nothing wrong ...

I think that this has really good structure. I thought it was well written, and the candle burning part was I think my biggest attack on it. That is only ...

That was a really good poem, I could feel the emotions that you put into it. I can tell you put a lot into it. With everything in there you ...

It has the potential to be really awesome -- And no I am not saying its bad, because its really good. :) I am just saying add some description, like ...